chap5p15

posted June 21st, 2011, 4:46 pm

well, now, thats a derp face if ever i saw one.

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June 21st, 2011, 4:50 pm

cupEcake

so's....

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i've decided that, if i get 20 + comments on this page, i will upload a link for you all to see the 'alternate' beginning that this comic had...

its actually kind of a completely different storyline...same charas (cal, griff and keel) with worse drawings, and no screentones (lol) and BAD HAIR. lol.
it has its good points and its bad points...i don't know why i didn't stick with this...i think because it happened in the middle of the story, and then when i wrote the beginning, it didn't actually fit in.

moral of the story, my children: don't start your comic in the middle.

either way, its actually really really cute...some of the later pages turn into just sketches, but seriously, some of the art is better than this here...lol.
so, if you want to see it, let me know! i have 700+ readers, so setting the minimum at 20 comments shouldn't be a stretch... :)

<3 <3

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June 21st, 2011, 5:17 pm

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First panel blush ; u ; so very very cute. OHOHO I wonder who heard thier convooo~
/snickers
Griff makes your little heart flutter with joyous thoughts along with extreme cuteness~
am I right ;A;

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June 21st, 2011, 5:26 pm

fishmasmouse

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THE FACE IN THE LAST PANEL LOL

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view Alexa0455's profile

June 21st, 2011, 6:41 pm

Alexa0455

Blush~

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He looks pretty XD oh oh i wanna see that alternate beginning!!<3

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June 21st, 2011, 6:51 pm

wicked kisameru

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Well...

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June 21st, 2011, 6:51 pm

wicked kisameru

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If I'll post...

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June 21st, 2011, 6:53 pm

wicked kisameru

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three comments it counts, yea?! :D but I really would want to get to know it :P

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view cupEcake's profile

June 21st, 2011, 7:02 pm

cupEcake

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lol no cheating! :)
20 different people! haha

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June 21st, 2011, 7:04 pm

booisl33t

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yo!

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June 21st, 2011, 7:24 pm

Rxn

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Comment~ I wanna see the extra stuffs! lol

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June 21st, 2011, 7:29 pm

Tomato-Rabbit

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I love your comic <3

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view LindsayThunder's profile

June 21st, 2011, 11:08 pm

LindsayThunder

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i like extra stuff! its like, getting a DVD movie that has two disks! woo~!

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June 22nd, 2011, 4:59 am

erm...hi (Guest)

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I lurv your comic >w< its so cute... but not knowing wtf is going on with this fin guy is pissin me off!!! me no likey those that get in the way of love!!! D:<

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June 22nd, 2011, 2:52 pm

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*is commenting* =D

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June 23rd, 2011, 11:07 am

Sychaar

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*dances* LOL THAT FACE IS SO CUTE. xD

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June 23rd, 2011, 11:54 pm

toratsubasa

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Uh-oh! Who could that be~?

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June 25th, 2011, 12:27 am

TruelyMe

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I'd like to see it. =)

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June 26th, 2011, 12:18 pm

Salad (Guest)

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This comic is so cute

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June 26th, 2011, 6:52 pm

Guest

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June 26th, 2011, 7:07 pm

cupEcake

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k...that '.' totally doesn't count as a comment!
big cheaters!

i wanted people to show love for the comic, which would be the incentive to post the other pages...

otherwise, it kind of makes me feel like this: T^T

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June 26th, 2011, 9:23 pm

Gopeach

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I LOVE THIS COMIC AND I WOULD LIKE TO SEE THE ALTERNATE VERY VERY MUCH!!! (could I at least see it secretly...?*puppy dog eyes* I really really wanna)
Gawd Cal with his blush face is irresistible !!!

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August 19th, 2011, 10:48 am

Dreamless Sleep

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arf i love this comic and i love extra stuffs and im commenting sooo.... :D

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August 25th, 2016, 1:33 am

Riaya

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Is it too late to see the alternate version?

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